Pitch feedback

Today in our lesson we pitched to the class again because we had made improvements based on their feedback they gave us the week before. Unlike last week, everyone understood what our narrative was about but wanted a clearer understanding to as what was going to happen at the end of the film. The class liked the fact that we had researched into our two films that inspired us which were prisoners and taken. However, some people thought that our budget was too high even though our film had Leonardo DiCaprio in it. They all understood what our title sequence was about and liked the concept. Something they wanted us to improve on was the narrative, the budget and to re-think the cast. This is because some people couldn't understand why Leonardo DiCaprio was in this genre. They thought we have to pick someone that has been in this genre before.